Saturday, September 15, 2012

SLAB INK

7th Attempt

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6th attempt


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THIS IS THE FINAL ATTEMPT AFTER JOHN.K OBSERVATIONS IN HIS BLOG:


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4th Attempt
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3RD ATTEMPT
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2nd attempt

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1st attempt

9 comments:

JohnK said...

The lines are nice and clean Paul

but the thickness around the forms lack consistency

they just seem randomly thick or thin

are you doing them in Toonboom?

Paul B said...

I had to do this inking in Illustrator because I don't have TB where I'm. The other inkings where done in TB. I'm gonna give it another try.

JohnK said...

same problems

inconsistent line weights

JohnK said...

there is no consistency

some of the outline is thick, other parts are thin at random

you need to hold the form together

JohnK said...

some of the same problems

his skull is still inconsistent

and now you have changed the shapes of some of the pencil drawing

feet etc.

JohnK said...

I don't know Paul

you just aren't reading the notes

the lines are real clean

but inconsistent weights

and very mechanical looking

Paul B said...

Ok, I'll read it again and give it another try. THANKS!

JohnK said...

what program are you inking in?

Paul B said...

The last inking (7th) was ToonBoom