7th Attempt
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THIS IS THE FINAL ATTEMPT AFTER JOHN.K OBSERVATIONS IN HIS BLOG:
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1st attempt
9 comments:
The lines are nice and clean Paul
but the thickness around the forms lack consistency
they just seem randomly thick or thin
are you doing them in Toonboom?
I had to do this inking in Illustrator because I don't have TB where I'm. The other inkings where done in TB. I'm gonna give it another try.
same problems
inconsistent line weights
there is no consistency
some of the outline is thick, other parts are thin at random
you need to hold the form together
some of the same problems
his skull is still inconsistent
and now you have changed the shapes of some of the pencil drawing
feet etc.
I don't know Paul
you just aren't reading the notes
the lines are real clean
but inconsistent weights
and very mechanical looking
Ok, I'll read it again and give it another try. THANKS!
what program are you inking in?
The last inking (7th) was ToonBoom
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